Beta pls?

Apr. 19th, 2010 10:46 pm
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I've got about 6500 words of an NC-17 (explicit sex) Pike/One STXI het_idfic prompt-fill, and I could use some help.

Not proofreading so much as "does this make any sense, does it conform at least reasonably to the prompt, and really, is 2000+ words of reasonably explicit sex too much compared to the amount of plot?"

You can leave me a comment, PM me, or email at circ.bamboo at gmail dot com.

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Title: Forget-Me-Not (working title)
Your Name / Username: [ profile] naimu
Verse: XI
Characters and/or Pairing: main pairing: McCoy/Chekov side pairings: Uhura/Spock (minor) Spock/Kirk, Scotty, Sulu.
Rating: R due to language, violence,boring sexual content, background character deaths.
Category: Slash (main), Mystery Romance
Disclaimer:I do not profit from writing this fiction.
Summary: Leonard McCoy is a single father and a family physician in the suburbs of San Francisco. He leads a relatively vanilla life with his daughter and his best friend Jim who is a professor of Criminology at UC Berkley until one rainy night he comes across a bleeding young man around his alley way. Little does he know that his uncharacteristic course of actions will change his life forever.

chapter excerpt:

this is a little bit of the first chapter.

praise it sweet toots! )

AUTHOR'S NOTE: this requires a patient beta who converses with the author! ^_____^ its a bit of a slow going story line~ and i hope that i can find the right person to write this adventure with!!!(IS HOPEFUL!!!)
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Hi there! I have a 4000 ish word fic for the K/S fic exchange. I'd like to get it done by Friday 3/19 and I'm searching for someone to look it over for me this weekend. It is an AU in which Spock, Gaila, & the other ambassadors' kids are the snooty rich kids and Jim's poor and has to work as a busboy. K/S pairing naturally probably some smut at the end.
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Another beta reader needed, this time for a nc-17 story a bit steamier then the one before, so I'm a bit nervous. It's suppose to be PWP, but I have an idea to expand it. All I need right now though, is a beta to go over this part.

Title: End of the Day
Character(s)/Pairings: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: pwp, language
Spoilers: None

Summary: At the end of the day…
Disclaimer/Notes: Not mine.

PM Me with whatever method you'd prefer to use with beta-ing.
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Title: Strange Bedfellows
Your Name / Username: gottabefierce (email:
Verse: Reboot/TOS
Characters and/or Pairing: Spock/McCoy, Spock Prime/Leonard Prime
Rating: Currently Pg-13 but I may be on the cusp of an R
Category: Slash
Disclaimer: All Ideas/Characters are subject to the copyright and were not used for profit in any way. This story was written for the enjoyment of writer and reader.
Author's Notes: This story is currently 1988 or so words and is probably a little crazy but I think it's one of the better stories I've written. I'm currently looking for someone who can do a quick beta for me.
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I'm in need of a quick beta of a short fic, about 490 words. It's Kirk/McCoy, NC-17 in rating. If anyone's willing please PM with whatever beta method you'd prefer. Thanks!

This is the header:

Title: Ticklish
Character(s)/Pairings: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: pure fluff, sex, language
Spoilers: None

Summary: McCoy is ticklish. Jim gets in trouble.
Disclaimer/Notes: Not mine.

I hope I did this correctly :)
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I have ~2,000 words written, and probably another 2-3K outlined, and am seeking a beta for consistency of characterization and tone as well as style and overall flow. I can handle arbitrarily large amounts of harshness as long as it is accompanied by suggestions for improvement.

Title: as yet untitled
Verse: reboot
Characters and/or Pairing: Uhura/Sarek; background Uhura/Spock
Rating: PG-13 for sexual content; further installments will probably be more explicit
Category: Het
Disclaimer: I make no claims to ownership of the ST franchise or characters. I am making no money from writing about them.

PM or email for fic please.

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Title: Greenhearted Valentine (work-title, that will probably stick, because I can´t create a good title to save my life)
Your Name / Username: [ profile] ksvalentine . It is about 4000 words (I´m writing the ending at the moment) long.

I will love you forever if you find some time to look at it! :)


Short Excerpt )


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I'm relatively new to writing in this fandom (though I've been in AOS fandom from the beginning), so I'm hoping I can find someone to help me out here. ^^

Title: A Fresh Start
Your Name: Morgan/[ profile] originalpuck
Verse: XI
Characters: Madeline
Rating: PG-13, for mentions of boobs
Category: Gen (with mentions of past femslash)
Word Count: 444
Disclaimer: I don't own Star Trek, and am making no profit off of this story.
Author's Notes: Madeline (the character in my icon) wasn't developed in the film beyond a name and a few shots of her, so I'm working on fleshing her out, as well as writing some stories about her. This was written in response to the [ profile] where_no_woman drabble-a-thon, for the prompt: 27. How do I look?

I'd love some help with the spelling and grammar, as well as someone to check over some of the vague world-building that's shown in the story. Thanks!

Summary: Madeline's back has been patched-up by McCoy, but the creation of new skin wipes out some of her old cultural scars.

A Short Excerpt Is Right Here )

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I found this group through a livejournal search.... My usual beta is temporarily indisposed and I have a fic I'd like looked over. Is there anyone here who would be willing? I'm mostly concerned with grammar, spelling, and tensing issues not caught by Word. I always feel more confidence posting when another pair of eyes has given my fics a once (or twice) over. Please let me know. Thanks!

Title: Introvenient
Username: [ profile] jaylee_g
Verse: Reboot
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Rating: PG-13
Category: Slash
Word count: 3,511
Status: Complete, one-shot

The fic is under lock here.

Please let me know if you are interested and I will unlock it for you. Thanks!
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Hi everyone! I'm looking for a beta for a Kirk/Reaper!Bones fic I wrote for the [ profile] st_xi_kink_meme for this prompt, and I'd kind of like an ongoing beta if anyone's up for it, because this fandom insists on eating my brain. (No, the [ profile] st_xi_kink_meme is not helping the problem AT ALL!) I usually write Kirk/McCoy, although there is the occasional Kirk/Spock or gen tossed in for fun.

Title: (To Be Determined--I can write 10,000 words but a title defeats me. Go figure.)

Username: [ profile] vlbuehle

Verse: ST XI, DOOM crossover

Pairing: Kirk/Reaper!McCoy

Rating: NC-17, very much so.

Category: Slash

Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be mine, more's the pity.

Author's Notes: This is 10,000 words, which I still can't quite believe. Fair warning, it is largely angst and porn, with a happy (and smutty!) ending. Basically, I'm looking for someone to proof it, tell me if it's flowing okay, and offer concrit if they're so minded. And a title suggestion would be greatly appreciated. I'd prefer email for correspondence simply because I check my email far more often.

Read more... )

Teaser )

Brief teaser above, so check it out and please get back to me if you're interested. *crosses fingers*


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Hello, hello! I am in desperate need of a beta, obviously. I'm a Kirk/McCoy writer who enjoys an over generous use of commas and needs some help. I've got three fics in the works that I need beta work for, I'd love to have a semi-permanent beta that I can seek help from whenever I've got a new fic.

Title: The Rest You Can Live Without and Terminally (plus another untitled)
Your Name / Username: [ profile] zephtastic
Verse: ST:XI (AOS, both AUs anyway)
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy on all three
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 (the three I am writing now only one goes as far as NC-17 and it isn't extremely explicit)
Category: Slash
Disclaimer: None of these characters or trademarks belong to me, never will belong to me and I profit in no way from writing about them. I only profit in love.
Author's Notes: Basically, this is a combined nearly fifteen thousand words of two different fics. It's a lot, really a lot, and I know it's asking for a lot. All I can offer is appreciation and love and my undying friendship. I need grammar check, flow check and basically everything checked to make sure I'm not an absolute idiot.
I'd prefer email for our means of correspondence. I'm totally not going to post the entire fics here, just snippets of two of them.

Snippets )

Thank you, thank you! I really hope there's a beta here for me. :D
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I'm writing this huge PWP McCoyfic and I would really like someone to beta it cause it's my first porny fic in like three years and my first "proper" Star Trek fic (that I'm posting, i've written a looooot more that will never see the light of day)...

Edit: Forgot to read the user info properly! Here's the proper format:

Title: Infected (this will change)
Your Name / Username: Captain/captaincadet
Verse: XI
Characters and/or Pairing: McCoy/Everyone, McCoy/Chekov
Rating: NC-17 (explicit sexual content)
Category: Mostly slash, a bit of het tossed in there
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Author's Notes: I'm asking for you to read over the entire... 4000 word story and check for grammar, pacing, and stuff you think is dumb. Pretty much make it better, if you can! I trust you!

Here's a chunk of it for you to get a feel... ) Nothing Explicit. Yet! ;)

And if you don't hate my writing after this story/aren't super busy & stuff maybe you could beta some other fics for me in future? I'd love you forever, PROMISE.

Okay thank you all! I'd fulfill some beta requests but I'm terrible at grammar and stuff. Haha...
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Title: Analogous (working title)
Author: Ametistina
Verse: DS9
Pairing: Kira/Dukat
Rating: NC-17, or maybe a hard R
Word Count: under 600
A/N: Set near the end of 4.14 "Return to Grace"

I'm loathe to post it un-betaed, but here's an excerpt )

A tiny little thing, and my first ficlet in this fandom. As such, I'm especially interested in a beta who knows the canon well (and could maybe give pointers on Cardassian anatomy). In fact, I've only made it through the middle of season 4 so far, so no spoilers!

Thanks in advance.
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I'm in the planning/initial drafting stages of a 9+-part epic romance. If any of you have read [ profile] mijan 's "And All The King's Men", the female half of the pairing is Janice Toland (yes, lieutenant commander, sim-supervisor Toland. That Janice Toland. Don't look at me like that, it'll work, I swear!) Anyway, the OC creator herself is going to be scouring the stories for character stuff, but I would like a second pair of eyes, for plot holes, sentence structure, tone, things that don't make sense, etc.

Series: Bring Me To Life
Pairing: Jim Kirk/Janice Toland, background Leonard McCoy/Tonia Barrows, Spock/Uhura, and Chekov/Sulu
Author: [ profile] mintcloud
Warnings: mentions of torture, starvation, abuse, PTSD, trust issues, het and slash, and angst galore. And sexytimes - eventually.
Rating: NC-17
Verse: reboot/XI
Length: This bastard is gonna be long. I don't yet know just how long, however. See 9+ parts for a clue.

Information, history, and everything else you need to know ATM right here.

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Hi All, I'm in search of a beta for this story. I'm a new writer, and I felt a little awkward writing dialogue -- so I'm not sure if there are any issues with the punctuation, it being clear who is speaking, etc. I'd also like feedback on if something doesn't make sense, or anything you see that could make this fic better! If you're interested in doing this, I can send you the full text via email.

Title: Crocus
Author: comet_jo
Verse: XI
Pairing: Sulu/Kirk
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex, some language
Category: Slash
Length: ~ 3,500 words
Disclaimer: I own nothing – all for fun, none for profit.
Warnings: None.
Summary: An away team beams down onto the planet Malark to supervise the signing of a trade agreement. Meanwhile, Hikaru's curiosity about alien flora expands his horizons.

Read the beginning... )
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hey, i need a beta for a story i've written for the reel_startrek comm. it's an Anastasia/Star Trek crossover.
Title: Memories Like Embers Keep Us Warm [Anastasia Remix]
Your Name/Username: [info]xxxxbulletsxxxx
Verse: XI
Characters and/or Pairing: Kirk/Mccoy
Category: Slash
I need someone who is good with grammar and tenses, so anyone interested?
The deadline for entries is the 16th of October, so it would need to be done by then.

umm... I'd really rather send a word document because I don't like posting anywhere other than my journal and my computer is being spacky about cuts so comment here if you're interested and then we'll work something out.

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Title: Arachnophobia
Your Name / Username: Alice / [ profile] b_c_draygon
Verse: Reboot
Pairing: Scotty/Chekov
Rating: NC-17 (explicit sex)
Category: Slash
Disclaimer: Star Trek doesn't belong to me.
Author's Notes: Written for this prompt at the Kink Meme. (It's been posted there, but I want to get it checked out and posted on my LJ, too.)
There are two versions of this fic - one with porn and one without. The version without is practically identical, except it has fade-out sex instead of full-on porn. I feel like a sellout for tagging porn onto a perfectly decent PG-13 fic, you see, so I'd kind of like to offer non-porn-readers the chance to read it, too. :)

I know it says in the posting instructions to post the fic here, but I don't like posting the full text of fics anywhere but my LJ. I'd rather email a word document to someone willing to read it through. (Mods, please tell me if this is out of line and I'll add the text.)

Any takers? Thank you! :)
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Title: The Botanical Wonder
Your Name / Username: [ profile] tinocka
Verse: Reboot
Characters and/or Pairing: Chekov/Sulu
Rating: Let´s say PG-13 an be safe...
Category: Slash
Disclaimer: Anything you recognise is not mine.
Author's Notes: Short how-they-happened-to-be-fathers-of-Demora-with-the-help-of-aliens fic. Also, my first Chekov/Sulu fic.

Anyone willing to beta it for me? :) Thank you :)

Read more... )
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Title: The Story of Creation
Your Name / Username:
[personal profile] tinocka
Verse: Reboot
Characters and/or Pairing: Spock/Kirk, Spock Prime/OMC, some Sulu/Checkov, hints of Scotty/Uhura and past Spock Prime/Kirk Prime
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Anything you recognise is not mine.
Author's Notes: The story covers twenty five years after the destruction of the planet Vulcan both on the USS Enterprise and the New Vulcan, fates of Spock Prime and the crew affected by the new assisted reproduction method and its creator. (Contains no m-preg.)

I can´t really post the fic here, I am afraid, as it is my
[community profile] startrekbigbang fic, but I really really need a beta, because the one who started working on it - and was doing excelent job - has health problems and won´t be able to finish it.

Would be anyone willing to do it? Please?

The story is not so long for Big Bang - it it below 16k.
Thank you.

Found! Thank you! :)

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