seeking beta for 16,000+ word story

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i am not often tempted to write as i am not an author but the bunny nibbled and i typed and typed. it seems fairly decent but would like to be better, word checked but grammar????

Plot: sulu sick, chekov tending him, not out right slash but implied, no graphic medical problems but discussion of some issues.

source: st_xi_kink_meme, abrams universe ( i think), and who ever owns all these people {not me}

not sure what else needs to be said so here's a cut of the pie:


( chekov the nurse )